You went away when I was in love the most...

by Avrii Monrielle   Aug 6, 2005


I talked to you every day,I got so entranced...you never scolded me for being stupid or hurt me for speaking my mind

To me,you were everything...and now you left....

I learned so much for you,and I hope others will feel so free in your prescence...

I love you so much,so please don't get hurt...

You were my brink to paradise.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww, very sweet!
    This one reminds me very much of me and my ex boy friend.
    You have described the way I felt, and the way he treated me.
    I think it's excellent. I gave you a 5!
    Well-done!

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