I wondered if anyone would enjoy this poem as much as I enjoyed writing it. Your comments were greatly appreciated.

OMG that was the sweetest poem . Keep up the writing looking forward to more .

That ending is just too cute ...I love it

Cool poem at first i thought you were talking about your child looking to you but you switched it up and you were talking about him. At least that's how i read it lol. great job though it's beautiful 5/5

I can see why this poem has all 5s! It's fabulous! 5/5

I love your poem, well written

Sir, My pleasure to read..... this was breathtaking written... Flow well within well expressed emotions. "As water is to a flower, So is praise to the heart of another." Keep them coming, may you've blessed day, take care. Bert.~

Very good i like your flow

Amazing write,took my breath away..
keep it up!
-Lisa

Look at a child, and you see God.They are pure, true, honest.And to them parent is all good, if not God, someone as close as Him.Looking up to you, asking, seeking their answers and comfort.This poem is truly wonderful.To mirror yourself and penning down taking the place of your child is fantastic.Great poem!

Its so sweet. i loved reading it.