Comments : Unforgiving Skies

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    I envisaged an innocent little girl in my mind when I read that. Nice poem, I liked it a lot.

  • sweet! i can so relate! keep it up, and check out my stuff 2! ;)

    <3 ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow... i love it!

    "Echoes fall by my side,
    and still no you,
    pull me up,
    I have nothing left."

    ...very powerful. keep it up!
    -xXx-