LMAO I LOVE BUTTERFLIES!!!
great poem tho

hey, that was a kewl poem.. it was differnt, really good =)

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Aw, i have to admit i kinda love butterflies !!
This is really well written though, you've created a whole new image for butterflies, it's a clever poem !!
Well Done !!

<3 Charli XxX

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that was really good bit wierd
plz read the 2 poems about christine i written it means so much
im so so so so so sorry i cant believe she gone she'll always be with us
loved this poem

andrea tears

hiya! you commented on my poem :P thankyou this poem rocks!! it's true no one ever suspects the butterflies ¬_¬ now i do :P butterflies are creepy....I HATE BUTTERFLIES!!! ¬_¬ well great poem 5/5 take care now :P lvya Jess X

although this poem might seem a little odd it is very good with rhythm and rhyme very good job keep it up! could u plz read some and comment on mtpoemz? thx it would mean a lot

this was interesting, i have never known anyone to not like buterflies
but anyways this poem, even though it was quite strange, it was very good and i liked it and the last stanza was very powerful and beautiful
great job
5/5

that is muh faverite poem so far....do u no if u swap the b with the f you get flutterbyes which seems alot more apropiate lol kik ass poem

Nice.

Whoa...i've never known anyone who was scared of butterflies....now i have a whole new image of them..scary but i loved it, it was so unique~

thx a bunches for comments on my poems**:)

Normally butterflies are a good thing..lol...i'm sorry...it was a good poem..and thanks for givin your 2 cents about my 2 cents...that makes alot of sense...lol well anyway keep em comin

Very cool you have talen.

But are you really scared of them
leona

Is it, maybe the butterflies at your place is creepy, but the one i see everyday is just harmless and cute little butterflies, you know, little, like you can grab it into your palm.

Anyway, i love it, it's so beautiful for a dark poem.

Reallyy amazing.. honestly.. very creativee!

Omg i love this poem!!!! its soooo well writen!!!! an wut a great idea!!!! your so talented! i'm so jealous! keep up the amazing work!!! lyl~lex

Wow. it is freaky. great job.

I loved your poem. I did find it a bit comical but then I started to think and now I will never see butterflies the same...lol. No but for real this poem was really well written. Keep them coming.

Hey, i love the way you just destry the cliqued feeling around butterflys. that makes this a great poem teh way youve taken something soo over used and warped to be something origonal. i like some of the images you use aswell, but this poem does seem a little bit restircted by form and rhyme. im not suggesting you chasnge it at all i love it as it is, but i really think your writing style will benefit from a freer form. youve used some fantastic images
xxx

(didya know that "no one suspects the butterflies" is a quote from the simpsons? i love that episode!)

Very well written, tho perhaps a little too strange for my liking. :P

great writing tho :)