I really like this poem, i think it would be ok though without having commas at the end on each line (not that it matters really) and gray is spelt grey, but i really like the poem and i love the bit about acid blood. its wonderful :D

another great poem and once again I know you pain, I relate so much!!! I hope that you are ok?? Great poem , i really love it...

*Hugs sabrina*

thats beautiful but kinda seems like you are doing it to your self