Yah...my first love poem...gonna use it one day...that is if im not rich!

this is a really really good poem..you really know how to treat a girl by the looks of it:P..and i hope that you do get to use it one day..anyway you really know how to write poems and what to say in them

Kaylee

That poem was really good..good choice of words..gosh you are a great poem writer..keep it up..I truly loved it..:) Great job!

xox-*..claire nicholle..*-xox

well that's certainly different...it's alright for your first love poem...

"I am a man that know you so well,
but...not even I can’t give you everything."

I think it should be:

"I am a man that knows you so well,
but...not even I can give you everything."

I think your other work's much better, but you're trying something new, so that's good....

xxx