Wonderful! What more can I say? I really loved it! You can check my poems too!

this poem is awesome and i like it very much.

Cool poem, the message is clear. Especially I liked that you also included this theme about how people want to control love through hating and teasing others, just because they are jealous or so.
So the last stanza is my fave though I also love these lines "If people hate seeing us together I don't care what they say,
Because they are going to have to deal with it every single day."
Amazing write.

Keep it up :-)
Lots of love
Sabine

Very nice write - a very apt message too.

thanks you guys for the comments.

A really nice and well expressed poem!shows the kinda person u are.....TALENTED!ur loaded wid it!keep it goin
haz

U r so AWESOME. the poems TOO!!
they are so perfect!