Watch them Fall

by Sean   Aug 8, 2005


From starlight wishes and falling,
Lovers dancing and contorting in
Loves embrace, two children holding
One another, precious as she falls
Asleep by you.

While you sit, and watch…
A predator on the prowl of the angelic
prey at your footsteps, and you hold her,
love her, and she feels the same.

This time together was unknown
to be see so glorious in his heart,
and the beauty of the girl who rests
sweetened and heated from loving symbols.
Counting her breathes and cherishing each one,
like starlight wishes,
watch them Fall.
Watch them,
Fall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Ooooh, you are good! This evoked so many different emotions as I read it! You're an outstanding writer, quite unique unlike many on this site! Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    "breathes" should that be "breaths"? Or am I just grammatically incorrect?

    You don't get as much recognition as you deserve. here you are, pouring your heart out in a unique and effective way whilst the rest of the teeny 'slit-my-wrist' poets are reading undeserving poetry.
    I love your writing. You're amazing, you make me believe in love. Thank you for that.
    I admire you.
    So write more.