My best friends

by Justin   Aug 9, 2005


(I am nine and so my sister typed this for me but i made it up myself)

I like my friends,
They are nice to me,
They are my best friends,
And I hope you can see,
They have been nice to me,
All of them,
For a long time,
I am writing this poem and I am nine,
They are the best friends to me,
I like them alot,
And we play outside in the summer when its hot,
Even when its super hot,
Under the tree is our favorite spot.

(note: yes I did type this for my little brother for spelling but he did make this up himself and he is only 9 years old so I think he did a very good job.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    amazing poem by a 9 year old boy.
    I loved it justin. you seem a very nice
    boy. my brother is 9 too. he doesn't
    write poems. but his writing is really
    good too. wish you the best of the best. much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Justin i really think your a very smart boy and i'm not just saying this because i'm your big sister, I think you can rhyme very well and I think its very sweet, I imagine you are going to be a great poet when you get older love you justin so much and good job i'm proud of you,

    Your big sis,
    Jess

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