I miss her

by Justin   Aug 9, 2005


I wasn't sure she loved me she was as pretty as a sea my love for her was great she even knew how to skate i miss her but I'm not sure she misses me my love burns for her like a thousand sea's sometimes i wish she was here but she is not here i wish she was near.

this poem is for Celesta.

again typed out by Justin's big sister but created by nine year old Justin.

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  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Aww... That's so cute:) I wish i was 9 again. Love sucks. lol it's a great poem. And i think it's so sweet that your sis does all this for you. My sister and brother are mean to me lol. *hugs* Keep up the good work babe.

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    very well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by hunnibunnz

    great job justin.. haha..and i do agree wit ur sis tho.. u r pretty young to have a girlfrend.. XD
    thanx for commentin little buddy=)

    take care
    Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    its really good justin.. celesta was a pretty girl but i think your a little too young to have a girlfriend but good poem juster, love ya

    Your big sis jess