Comments : Suffer for Tomorrow

  • 18 years ago

    by Unrequited

    wow, this one is amazing, Stray! wonderful job on this one... i can truly feel all the emotions! keep it up- u will always have a reader in me! keep in touch!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    great job! 5/5 definately!! ur such an amazing writer!! keep it up!! *hugs* oh yea i lyked ur poem 'art' but my fukced up cp wouldnt let me comment on it!! it was very sweet and beautifully written 5/5! XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Im back frum d philippines. :] i will love to tell you of that paradise,youd wanna go there too...

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Wow, that portrayed so much emotion in it i wish i was that good.... its truly heart felt.. keep it up and please rate mine also if u get time. thankya:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    That was a really great poemit sounds like you put alot of though into them!Good job 5/5.I hope that you read my poems and tell me how I did on mine.Thx.Comment back plz
    ¤Heather¤

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Great poem. I can relate.
    "I will smile i will laugh
    no more..." I have been there time and time again, feeling the very same way. This was truly sad and really good. Nice job:) Oh, and thanks for the comment on my poems. It really means alot to me:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Dang,you hit 120! we need to give you a prize! :)

    *clap clap*

    i wrote a poem on nature,its called when we were still kids...

    Please read it...itll make you feel better...trust me :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    *hug* I'm just so glad you're alive...

    Live each day,for each day makes you older,so if you live the days you can have so many more good memories than none at all. The bad past is the obstacle before the goal-a happy life. You will be fine *hug*...

    I wrote my poem "Hug" for you if you didnt recognize by now...

    Lots of love,
    (also known as LOL)
    Rain

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Yet again awesome, 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    You have such a talent for poetry! I love it...can relate...keep hanging in there.

    blush
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

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    sphinx,it hurts once you read something again and again and feel the meanings come back from under the scars.

    my mom was trying to get me interviewed for a restaurant commercial. i swear i coulda died.

    ~rain