WOW this is really good.. keep up the awesum work..5/5
Luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

most songs on this site i really cant say i like very much because i'm not musically adept. i cant picture the song in my head the way they might have. but in your poem/song, i really could picture something. very beautiful work. hope to see more.
-A

I LOVE that...and would love to hear it put to music also...lovely job...

xxx

I love it, its very relevant to me at the moment as well (i dnt know if thats a good thing) i love the bit 'inject your sadness into my veins' oh i love it so much, i've mad eit my msn name for the minute.xxx

LOOOVVE IT! the words and they way to put it in a song is great! It would be awesome if i could actually hear it as a song, but unfortunatly it hasnt been made into one yet lol. My poem/song "Gun to my head" is also a loud rock rhythm, so look at that one if ur interested in reading it. awesome song/poem, keep in touch!
Stray

You have your style... and after I read this poem you at my favorites list.
5/5

Omg this is great...