I love it:) It's wonderful. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Liked this one too, but should be devided in to more lines, kinda feels like reading an essey:p

Best wishes,
Patrik

hehe.. i lykd this one.. ur poems are sorta different to those ive read.. i dunno how, but its all gud.. :D.. i yk ur use of words and rhyme and the way u noe how to say wat u wanna say
keep it up
nouna

Just slightly arrogant that poem, but if someone wouldn't accept a cloud that someone else had pulled down from the stormy heavens, then yes, they clearly are not good enough for the person who managed to pull down the cloud in the first place!

Good Writing!
beth

I would present my prize to you but i know you'd be too proud
That's my favourite line, but really the whole poem is great! I have no criticism :)

The best poetry comes from pure emotion. And this poem has it. Keep up the good work.