Comments : You must do this

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Another great poem that has touched my heart. I'm a bit lost for words on this one, so short and sweet... BEAUTIFUL!

    SiE XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    i agree with simon... absolutely beautiful!!! im really sorry for your loss. take care and stay strong!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Very very wonderful piece...im deeply sorry for your loss....if you ever want to talk to someone you can always email me or IM me.....i have yahoo and AIM my emails in my profile email if you ever need someone to talk to ....thank you for the comment....keep up the great work i love your poetry....

    ~xxx's~
    Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ Rejekted

    Excellent poem! i love it, thanks alot for commenting on my poem, it meant alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Wow... so sad, your poems are so consistently amazing, harrowing

  • 17 years ago

    by Aline

    Niiiiiice, i liked it 4/5