if only dreams could be reality...Good job!5/5!

i loved the contrast between reality and dreams and it was soo good.
nice job.
Emma5/5

I'd say it was a good START to a poem. I think you should keep going...there's so many different ways that poem could go. I was left wanting more...wanting to know what else in your life differs from your dreams...I like it though....Nicely done....