wonderfull ,I liked the lines with the hummingbirds and the Spanish guitars, very creative and inspiring . Also I liked how some of the lines rhymed that gave your words much more intensity .

Lots of love
Sabine

I loved the poem. I just allowed the words to paint this gloriuos picture and from that came the feelings of true honest love. Very special

Beautiful, simply beautiful! Sorry I can't say anything else, but you're on my favourites!

I love this short and sweet poem
~ sarah

Simon,

This was a lovely piece of work. Keep up the writing.

Regards,

Steven

Awwww this is so cute i wish i could find some one like u keep up the good work

Beautifully conveyed! This is written so passionately. I love the line about the sunset fading. Wonderful imagery~Holly

Very pretty!

Beautiful!

Hey Mr.Simon

Let me just say first off, thank-you for your comment on my poem "stella and james" also, i have read this poem many times why i havent commented i dont know..lol I really enjoyed it its a simple short worded poem giving all the emotion in the world...its amazing how very few words can convey a message as strong as that. I wish you and your loved one a life full of happiness

take care!
Miss.Scooby

This is short and sweet. I really like it. Great write. It flows really well too.

Wonderful work!! I enjoyed the triolet. I've never read one before so I guess this was a wonderful one to start at.
5/5 Beautiful work!!

Take Care
CK♥

Aww, while reading this I am invisioning you standing in front of a lake during a full moon showing your mystery lady the moon that is reflecting in the lake.

I always loved that particular love story, thanks for making me remember it.

This is a short poem, but I loved it.

What's there to contruct? I like it the way it is.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Very sweet poem really..
5/5
smile:)

Great job you make me miss being in love, thanx
Tim

This Poem Is Soo Good.. No Wonder You Got Goot Ratings!

Wow 5/5
i loved that poem :) :) :)

bEyOnDhElP

Good flow, great poem, and alot of love good rhymes, I can definetly see why it's your featured poem.

Short and sweet. You captured the true feelings of love in this write!
5/5

Simple. simply beautiful.

shobhana