aww that was very good. very sweet, i wish you two luck, and i hope you last long

AGAIN, nice rhythym, fairly creative as well. 5/5.

aw that was nice i liked the idea well done!

aww it was cute.a poem about true love.

omg i didnt realize you had a new poem!!! great job i loved it!! its sooo goood! great job you are definately talented!! 5/5! i'd give it a 10 if i could, haha! great job! take care bud and god bless!

Very nice kay kay!!!!! lol come check out my poems!!!!!!!! ily!
jescelle

Cute poem...5/5

Pretty good.. decent flow and rhyme.. the following line doesnt sit well with me for some reason.. my head keeps wanting to change it it.. away from there.. even th0 that would interrupt the flow.. it just seems awkward to me as is.. anyway good job.. love, like writing, is a good get away.. i agree..

We had to get away,
Away out of there.

Great poem.. very cute =D 5/5!

That was great, 5/5, the rymeing was excellent, your flow was perfect, and I enjoyed the poem itself, great job!

Great poem! Beautiful! I enjoyed it and I'm sure many people can relate! Love ya lots!!!!