Ill take the bullet

by JOn Fields   Aug 11, 2005


This is more of a story

\\\"Shes gone someone has taken her\\\" thats what he heard from her mom that night and so hours went by and all he could think about was her and then he finally gets the courage to find her and he goes to this wearhouse and there she is tied up and the guy holding her asks \\\"what are you doing here\\\" and he says Im here to take her back\\\"
and the man asks why and he tells him that he loves her and the man sits there and says \\\"you can say that you love her and that she is your everything but what comes down to is if your willing to take the bullet for her and so are you willing to jump\\\" the man fires the bullet and the boy jumped in the way and he lands on her lap and the man takes the blindfold off of her and lets her watch him die as she could do nothing and as he bleeds to death on her lap he tells her that he loves her and always will but before she can say it back his heart stopped beating
The man gets away but only for a little bit for he left fingerprints all over her and they catch the man but he kills himself with a bullet to the head and he left a note for the girl that said i only wanted you to love me
The man was an ex boyfriend and the man who took the bullet for her was the man who stole her from him

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  • 20 years ago

    by Casey

    I really, don't like poems that are written in paragraphs like its a story from a book, I don't usually take the time to read poems like this, but I'm glad that I did this time.