Hm, i liked this one too. It had a sort of uniqueness. It was very well written, and i loved how you said what will be happening and then you ask over again with such passion for that girl to be your Valentine. I hope she says yes, if she is real.

-Jennifer.

Beautiful!!! keep up the great work!
-xXx-

Hey it was pretty good. Better than the last one. Good job. Never give up. kilman

Wooow gd poem dude

keep it up

sarah x x x

Pretty...it's so beautiful...i don't think any girl would reject you for a poem so sweet like this...the girl who does...must be blind...