It sounds like you lost someone close to you, i hope his heart did break when you parted.
xx
nice poem 5/5

If it was ment to be you wouldnt have split up. You'll find someone who wont leave you like he did. Someone who wont hurt you.
Love you baby, great poem x

Great poem xxx

Again awesome poem! i love this part :
Tell me you thought of me, dreaming away,
tell me the truth, admit your heart broke that day.
its amazing!keep writing! your awesome-hayley