its a good poem...5/5..well done keep it up..keep y ahead up
-angel-

yeah i agree with angel... great poem... 5/5 for sure...

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Good. I like the words you used. They fit nicely... It flowed well... Very good write...

i loved it, i loved your choice of words! it was a great job

Aye reli enjoyed dis....love dia mwaz xoxo

Hey this is great u should make a sequel 5/5

Hiya, I really enjoyed reading this. I read it a few times to try and get the meaning of it, I find it really deep. Well done and take care
- Polly x

Thnx for ur comment but i think your poem is way well written than mine, nice way to describe the grief.

As always interesting and raw. You have this rough style, not beauty or grace but something still attractive about what you write. I love it.