Not the most usual to reading poems like this but.. good job.

Wow ur a good poet....and very detailed 2....

I liked this one.. It shows great imagery. Nicely done! Hope to read more. =)

-Jennifer. Overall Rating:4.5/5

Nice poem, it's different than what I've read of you, I like it alot! ;)

Love, Ashley

Very sweet poem...great way of showing a person how much u love...lovely work!...filled wth passion..kp it up!
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