i love it....reallly good poem.. i cut as well quite severly i suppose but i have been tryin to stop because people have found out about it and its eating them all up:(... in my case a lie that draws a smile is beter than the truth that draws a tear..keep it up
xxshellxx

wow love it i know how it feels i just cut friday night love the poem so full of emotion hope you really dont feel this way

andrea

I use to cut as well, the thought
still crosses my mind at times.
Cutting use to be my only source
of relief, but i've turned to writing
now. Sometimes i still wish to see
the blood, because something about
seeing the blood draining away, felt
as if the problem was draining away.
I'm here to talk if you need someone
to talk to.

Gosh, what an amazing poem. I can totaly relate. Keep writing and don't give up. You have an awesome writing talent. Don't stop! Check out some of my poems if you want.

I know your pain and your urge. so jut to know your not alone. Great poem, Very powerful and emotional. Mines kind of like your in a way. Its called 'Save Me' I think you'd like it.

Keep it up
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Love, u know u i love you muchly. Its great tho that u can be so creative with it, cos ithinkits doing u good.

Thanku everyone, keep it up xx

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SO MUCH BRILLIANCE IN ONE LITTLE HAMMER XXX

Beautiful

i felt so much emotion in this poem
i know exactly how it feels and it was freaky how well you described it
great job

Very deep...literally and figuratively. Love the poem. A lot of details...strong of emotions (anger, shame). Keep up the good work and try not to hurt yourself...we need you in this world

Wow i like this sooo luch like i could never put my feeling into words like this-but it seems like you did it for me:P well your such an awsome writer, hope you never lose it (*huG*)

Thanku guys, it means so much xxx

Wow that poem is really really good its so simple but yet it says so much i really love it
lots of love
☼Becky☼

Dats so beautiful!!! i hearts it!!!!!!^_^

Thanku both, i really appreciate it xxxx

Thanku for your comment xx

"Then its all over
with an odd feeling of calm
hide the cuts
to avoid raising alarm

Its enough for now
you feel almost fine
away goes the blade
until next time "

those were my 2 fav. versez outta that one..mostly cuz i can relate, but another reason is cuz it just endz so perfectly! well, that was a great job! take care

Wow! You have talent! I've read a few of your poems and I love them all! I think you're a really talented poet!
My poems aren't really appreciated by other but i really don't care, I write them for myself.