Comments : Pretty Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    oh my god, moving

  • 18 years ago

    by lance

    I think this is a very sad poem... well written

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    Oh my gosh emma, i think thats the best one of urs iveread so far, seriously. I like the rhyming scheme and the repetition. It has a feelign of going down further and further, but the words pretty girl really add a contrast to it, like dark and light. Dude, this is so great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I LOVE THIS INSANELY TO ILLUSTRATE THE INSANITY I AM WRITING IN CAPS WITH NO PUNCTUATION - I LOVE YOU HAMSKI XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Lol, luv u too! thanku every1 xxx