That was so good.omg...i havent written 4 a while..check out my new poem....Untitled

You keep catching me with the ending of these poems. I love this one as well. This one flowed wonderfully. and was very heartfelt...nicely done!!

Wait im stuck so in da poem there still togetha since he followed her or did it come to an end n there far apart? eitha way great poem just im slow when it comes to interpretin poems

Wow really great poem....i enjoyed it very much....great job 5/5 keep it up...thanks for the comments on my poems...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Excellent writing on this one. We have all felt the emotions of those words before in our lives. 5 from me.

Flowed perfectly, loved the ending. Very meaningful! 5!

Great poem i feel the same please take a look at some of my poems!

That makes me want to cry its so sad and has so much meaning in it...keep writing it's a great poem