this is a wonderful poem- i cant think of any really good titles but maybe something along the lines of "Decietful Wall" or "Trust Untrusted" lol ya they may sound bad im not in my writing mood now but its a beautiful poem and i can relate - except thats both of us not just him- doesnt help really but hey- thank u for ur comment and i understand why ud think its weird to like it - i did too lol ... ok well keep it up..
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great job. it's very hard to get someone to take dow the walls! don't give up!

great job. it's very hard to get someone to take dow the walls! don't give up!

aww.. that was so nice.. i loved ur rhyme and ur last stanza just said so much.. keep goin.. this is gr8
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