That Night ...

by ThugPoet   Aug 14, 2005


I got to come clean baby, I got to avow,
I got to put it in words, I got to somehow,
how did You make me feel, those
feelings I felt,
I swear one look from You,
made my soul melt,
as I knelt, softly kissing Your
lips,
as I grasped Your back, You holding me in between Your hips,
I placed You down kindly, and You were pulling me close,
Our embrace intensified, Our
kisses deepened to the up-most,
Our tongues so temperate, We
were lost in the moment ...

As I gently pulled away, I rested
in Your heavenly eyes,
in that second we both felt
that feeling we just could not deny,
You gave me the OK, closed Your eyes, and bit Your bottom lip,
You gently caressed my head as I gave You a hickey or two, OK maybe a few, but that wasn’t it,
I knew You wanted more, You were breathing real deep,
Your body heat, grinding Your
teeth, every so often You were
clenching the sheets,
so I snuck my hands under Your sweater and placed my hands on Your shoulders,
ran my hands right down to Your waist, and Your top quietly fallowed, for a second it got colder ...

You quivered, so I leaned in
closer, cuddled and kissed
Your collar bone, all alone
my voice in monotone,
I told You that I Loved You, and You mean the world to me,
the fragrance of Your body was
intoxicating, something more to me,
Your aroma was amazing, something I could not imagine,
warming me like waking up at
dawn in a bed draped in Jasmine,
as I kissed between Your chest I felt Your body get wet, and I moved low, then I heard You say "Yeah!" as You exhaled slow,
You clutched my head with pleasure as You caught Your breath,
as I bit You softly on Your
breast, overcome with emotions and pleasure, it was just too intense -

Suddenly I awoke! Again I was dreaming about that night ...
Every poet has their inspiration,
You are the reason why I write,
I guess I will never know if its real,
the feelings You made me feel,
Where time did not exist, in an ocean of bliss ... that night you made my soul kneel ...

*I Love You*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Just Another Dreamer

    Wow- this is really good! I like it a lot. Great job. You mentioned on a comment to one of my poems that you got inspiration for this poem from mine. And I just thought I should tell you that you did a very good job with this. So keep on writting. I must say though, I really liked the lines that said:

    "Every poet has their inspiration,
    You are the reason why I write"

    Very good. You should check out my poem I Had A Dream. It's got two parts but I'd like some feedback to see if I should keep going with that. But anyways, I just had to tell you that you did quite a job with this poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I loved the poem!! Its really good and like I said before, you're really talented! :D Keep doin your thang lol Take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    WOW!! AMAZING! i loved this. This is definetely by far the best poem in this type. So much passion and meaning to ur words. ive never ever heard it expressed so beautifully!!

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian John

    Splendid

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Aroma

    I liked this poem a lot. Im enjoying reading all of yur poems and so far this is one of my favorites. And that must have been some night

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