I don't know what to say--
that was wonderful.......
keep writiing

dang man that was really good, really really good!

EXCUSE ME that poem is just so great i loved the way u expressed you feelings i expescialy liked the part when u sed somethign about the moisture on you thighs it turned me on so much and the trusting and pounding it was great i sat her n played

you can really write. I really like it.

So Beautiful and very sensual.....hugs, love, Ann

Thats nice but shouldnt it be in the explicit place.

Hey awesome!!!!!

This was hot, very sexual