Journey to Paradise

by FlowerThatDied   Aug 14, 2005


Glowing color in her eyes,
No time for the wheres and whys,
Looking for a bloody stain,
So her fate won't be the same,
An angel falling close behind,
The determined girl whose strong in mind,
While carrying on the fight to save,
You and her from your grave,
But while she searches for the blood,
You hear a sudden thud,
Running upstairs to see what it was,
A man tells you "Go back, Why you ask? Just because"
So you run back down stairs,
To find the trap door to another layer,
You cannot find her, you are lost,
And for curiousity you must pay the cost,
You turn to walk another way,
A hanging woman with a note saying: Now you'll pay,
This is sickening,
Your heartbeats quickening,
Breathless now screaming,
Torment inside and trying to hide,
You feel as if there are hundreds of eyes,
Watching, Watching your quickening breath,
Your silent torment and ever growing fear,
Then you see her lying there,
Shes not moving just looking at you with a stare,
Tears rolling down her cheek,
Someway to save her your trying to seek,
Rocking her back and forth in your arms,
You suddenly notice the blood on your palms,
And though you don't want to leave her there,
You must go and finish this with care,
Its what she wanted and you know,
She would never have stopped although,
She cares for you like you do her,
This was all she ever dreamed of,
A whole new world,
Something for all of you,
You could treat her with the bark of a tree too,
And so smashing the glass of the dark worlds walls,
You block out the screams and hissing calls,
You've been trying to reach your destination could it be this,
Its a chance you cannot miss,
Out of the open window with shattered glass,
You see a land full of meadows, full of grass,
This is it where she wanted to be,
In a world of paradise and serenity,
You run back to find her but shes gone,
But you know it won't be long,
Until she finds you in this place,
Secret, hiding Paradise

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vivian

    I loved this poem. Very good. and ty for commenting on mine. You are a great poet, and ur other poems are good too. Keep it up

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    by Marie

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    by Mark

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    by chris johnson

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