wonderful pattern and rhyme scheme- very nice job on this! keep it up!

I normally don't read love poems because most of them are just repeating over the same thing...but every once in awhile I come across one that I love...like this one for example. It flowed and rhymed flawlessly. good work!

Well done...I agree with The Unrequited... lovely work...

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this is one of the most beautiful poems that i have ever read...you express such emotion its very lovely...thank u for commenting on mines i appreciate it...5/5

Aww I am in tears right now, this is a beautiful poem hun, I loved it you have great talent

Its so sweet.. exactly how i feel for someone too at the moment so i can relate:)

Jacs
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Thats a really nice poem..5/5...shows strong dedication to this person..i use to feel that way about someone..but she pushed me away for too long...well..alot of my poems tell the story about that..any way..good poem i liked it

Hey your really good keep writing