that was deep..i was stuck from the beginning!

the flow was great and i liked the idea of the smile.

well done:)

great poem. i really liked it. it seemed personal. keep it up.=)

Thank you for the comment on my poem. I loved this poem. I know how easy it is to just hide all the pain. I am fighting my addiction to the blade. Its been now because I have stopped hiding. it really helps to be able to be truthful with someone. (aluthugh Im never 100%)

great poem travis.
you did a brilliant job on this one.
keep writing your wonderful poems.
wish you the best,
marjan

amazing job! it's so full of emotion. keep up the great work.
crystal

wow rockin' poem lol u r still in my faves from the last time i read ur poems lol! =)!
5/5!
<3 eLiZaBeTh

a bit confusiing at times but other then that nice job...keep it up luv yas mwah

-kayla-

It's a little cliche, because nowadays everybody writes about cutting (no offense!), but it still has a nice ring to it : )

I liked this best:

Blood is the new way
A smile is still a lie

♥Niki

Your rhyming is a little rocky in this poem, but overall, it's good. It's original, not on the content, but the way you phrased things and the way you thought about it. I loved your last two stanzas "The worst is over This feels better than you (Better then a small kiss Cut me up in two) (Tears are my way To saying bad bye) Blood is the new way A smile is still a lie" [Especially the phrases i put in parenthesis]. Nice. Keep working on it.

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

I liked this. It flowed good and it was pretty good overall. The idea is repeated and not origanal but it was still prettty good. I give it a 4/5. your a great writer though!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

I'm speechless....another brilliant poem....I relate 101 % to this one, I know your pain!!! My fave part:

It's easy to mask
My cutting smile
I'll do this until
911 you'll have to dial

sadly some one called 911 on me when I tried to commit suicide....

*Hugs Sabrina*