i really like your poem. great job.
crystal

Great poem! it flowed nicely, i can see why its got a 5 as its average rating, great job! 5/5!!

The 3rd stanza seemed a little out of pace as it did not match the other two's technique. Overall I thought it was pretty good, 3.5/5. Unfortunately I can't vote ½s :S Kim x

Aww that was touching...I could tell it came straight from your heart. Excellent poem