Love Struck Story

by FlowerThatDied   Aug 15, 2005


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The Girls Last Suicide Note

Oh Boy,
My pillows wet with secret tears,
My wrists are cut with secret fears,
My photos fake with a fake smile,
My hearts been full but with numb feeling for a while,
My mother is suicidal with worries for me,
My songs are love sick with wanting to be,
My bodys lifeless on the floor,
My soul is lifting the love from my core.
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The Boy She Loves Tears

Oh baby,
What have you done my dear,
I love you I promised to defeat your fear,
I hid my love for way too long,
And now its all completly wrong,
You died my darling because you thought I didn't care,
And I'm so sorry I also promised to be there,
Oh my God what have I done?
You were my light like a blinding sun.
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Friends?

Dear friend,
We defeated you we thought it was for the best,
But he meant above the rest,
I love you as a friend forever and a day,
And my care will never fray,
I'm so sorry I want you back,
I'll never judge you I'll cut you some slack,
Please girl I'd never have said any of it,
If I ever thought you'd go and end it
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  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    OmIgOsH!
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    0(-_-)0 5/5 bAbEs!
    *eLiZaBeTh*

  • 18 years ago

    by .:miss briTTney:.

    Well srry I have to disagree with everyone I didn't think this was one of your best.But keep up with the good work!
    Brittney
    aka**mysterio~lover**

  • 18 years ago

    by jazz

    WOW i loved it , keep ^ da good work i gave u a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by tea lady

    woah thats a weelll good poem keep it up :) n thnx for your comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    wow! great poem 5/5 thnx 4 ur comment :)

    love mark xxx