Comments : Writing On The Wall

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    wow very dark

    He saw the crimson traces,
    Yet he chose to look the other way.
    Never did he suspect that at night fall,
    He would sleep for eternity

    that bit is brill! xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Its all good, loved it 5/5

    love mark xxx