This is a very powerful poem. The depth of love is so clear. Well written

This is great. thnx for my comment.

Wow lyss........i know exatly how you feel! i see my bro going down too, or at least i feel it, cause im not allowed to see him or talk to him......... god im crying now....... anyway, awsome poem........ come check out mine and leave some comments!
jescelle

~*WoW that was so good *tears* it was very pwoerful i loved it great work 5+*~ XoXo

Awesome and emotional poem. Keep it up