wow... thats amazing zac. hope your okay. great great poem.

excellent write!!! I LOVED IT SOOO MUCH! ur so talented and I hope you never, ever forget that!
take care:)

Thats sweet, no thats not the word, deep well yeah but im trying to say its sweet but sad? understand, the ending was sweet but the idea was sad :|

I confuse myself to much!

Ok I enjoyed your poem the title was very catchy :D

the flow was good and you put emotion in it well done :D

x)

wow. that's just.. wow. can't really explain what it is. i know the feeling kid, but believe me, you'll get through it in the end. it's tough but you'll make it.
~Emma~
oh.. btw, if you don't mind me asking, who's this beauty about?

AH!! I can so relate to this poem man. Seriously, read my stuff, and we're in the same boat dude. Unless you're writing about something that didn't happen to you, then I'm on my own! Anyways, awesome poem man.
Short and Sweet ;) 5/5

OMG.. that was so sad.. i loved the emotion between the lines.. i like the part wer u sed "I loved the way you walked away / and everything else you do" it showed me that u reli loved her much n a lot.. im sorry if this reli happnd 2 u.. hope u get you "heart OUT OF the blender" soon. :)
much love
nannoush

This poem was great. i really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up

This... wow. Incredible write... yet another that came from the heart, perhaps. Not forced at all, simply superb. One of your best. Great work, 5/5

Car

This... wow. Incredible write... yet another that came from the heart, perhaps. Not forced at all, simply superb. One of your best. Great work, 5/5

Car

Amazing poem mr monkey! 5/5 much love to ya
Chelsea

Spifferific!!! lol!! Just.....heartbreaking in a peachy sort of way, lol.

Really well done

WOW! Huny I can relate to this poem SOOO much! Amazing write 5/5 take care

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

WHOOHOHOHO!!

Baby when you left my life
You tore my love to pieces
A man can’t survive without his heart
And I’m dying by this thesis

that sounded like lyrics, but the type of lyrics that make good quotes...the ones you see icons about!! God!!!!!!!!! I'm jealous right now. Extremely so.