It was an okay poem. Nothing special but I can tell you put some effort into it. A couple of the rhymes were forced and the rhythm was a bit off. The one thing that really stands out in this poem is its emotion. You expressed your feelings well...and that's all that matters. Keep on writing. Take Care.

~rolo

I tought the flow was good and I liked the idea, for once I got nothing to say and other people do, Im sorry I really liked this poem x)

i think it's good. you did a nice job rhymeing and the flow was really good. i can really relate to the idea as well. being there for someone and them not realizing it can be tough. great job!
crystal

I think you did a great job on the rhyming the flow was good as well. I think it could have more detail but other than that I think you pulled it off. Take Care! Brooke~

I think you did excellent job on this poem. Keep up the awesome work!

flow is a bit off but other then that nice job...thats for all the wonderful comments on mine....you're a sweetheart! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

hey thnx for all ur comments lol and great poem

Well it's from the heart and that's what matters... it wouldn't be one of your bests, but they can't all be...so don't worry 'bout it. It's still a good poem.

xxx

I think it is good..i like it..short but makes a point..godo job..

xoxoxoxoxo,
Crystal
p.s. check out my poems if you can PLEASE