Comments : A Lonely Journey

  • 18 years ago

    by Naima

    Wow amazing!!!! I loved that poem real sweet! way to go!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Great poem - You've put some real emotion into this. It's sad that he is leaving, yet beauitful because he wants to find his one love :)

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Short but very expressive... life sucks?
    anyways.. i took your advice and wrote another poem not about anything sad or love??
    anyways.. nince poem :) loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Omg that is so sweet! i love guys that write poetry! there all so good! and te ones that do are the sweet ones! so im assuming you are one of the sweet ones! I love all your work! iv read every poem of yours! and there all fantastic!! your sooo good!
    Love Paige!
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxo
    please look and comment on some of my poems! like you my poems are about real experiences ive had to encounter through my life! you might not like them! but then maybe you might! i dunno! so please check them out and let me know for sure!
    Love ya xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    An amazing j0b darl 0n all ur w0rk. beautifully written. such a sweet write. heartfelt beautifully w0rded. keep it up
    i cann0t wait t0 red new w0rk! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Awww..
    ~shanny~

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Good emotion