Good job duckie... some of the rhyming is really forced... but its still a great peom! 5/5
hannah

Good job gurlie...very nice...and ppl do care bout you.. I do!!!

Neat. kinda difficult to understand in some places, but other then that, good. 4/5

The title is actually my favorite part and then the poem is amazing as well great job with this one its my favorite so far 5/5

I really like this one and the revelation of the "queen of broken dreams" hit my ears and rolled off your tongue (or typed) in a manner that pleases all.... 5/5