Until My Last Breath

I love it. It makes your mind wander. I do that alot.

Pete

Oh wow..that is very very good..great job. i like this..it is very pretty...5/5...good job..

xoxoxoxo,
Crystal

I often live in a dream world but i love it - It's a nice place - lol. It was written with so much feeling and you easily get an image into your head when reading it. Oh how i do love reading love poems, they cheer me up cos the lad i liked alot is messing me about so i feel kind of lonely and upset right now :)

Ann, that was so beautiful, I want to live in fantasyland too. Superbly written poem, with such a peaceful feel of true love! Take Care! Brooke~

I loved your peom it provided me with a great picture of two in love and knowing that they would be together forever.