Comments : Mommy why did you die part 2

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aww hun, so sad, yet so beautiful (as always)... you're so talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aww hun, that's so sad, yet beautiful (as always)... you're so talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was really nice i liked alot..I like how you write----Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Again, amazing poem. I feel bad if this happened/happens to anyone....great job..

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow this was sad everyone she loved left her and she still made it. thats show's she strong i liek that keep it up 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark Coates

    Nice one very gd

  • 18 years ago

    by april

    B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

  • 18 years ago

    by Greedy

    It brought tears to my eyes...beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kogila Kanni

    Wow! was very touchin! very nice.. i enjoyed it ya! write more ya! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    Aww..this is sad:(, very well written, but very sad...I hope it's not true, but if it is, im deeply sorry. thank you for the comment on my poem, you are a gifted writer as well...keep writing!~
    take care, love always~
    -Britt

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    That made me cry
    wow
    wow
    WOW!

  • 18 years ago

    by lorna westwick

    Wow wow and more wow i feel like crying this poem ismind blowing and you say you are no good you need your head seeing too
    xlornax

  • 18 years ago

    by kay tee

    Keep it up! thats really good! n thanks for commentin on my poems 2

  • 18 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    Good poem 4/5 it was a good story but i didnt catch onto the flow... maybe its just me?? good poem tho keep writing!
    -RisSa*

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww omg this makes me cry hun, this is so sad I dont know where it came from if it actually happened to you then im so sorry, it hurts to lose people you love I know but hang in there, theres a plan for all of us hun, you have HUGE talent keep it up cannot wait to read more from you, lubb you

  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy Dao

    Love how you wrote it

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow that was really deep, and very well written, Nice, u have talent on written, keep it up, bye

    Rico Smoooth

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted faith

    O god babes, ne1 would think u had a heart if they read this poem, @ least i know the truth. nah seriously gd poem

    luv ya (bt nt like tht :P)
    rach
    xox

  • 17 years ago

    by april

    THE BEST POEM EVER