Deep breath

by Caroline   Aug 19, 2005


I cant believe hes doing this

deep breath
deep breath

what is he saying?

deep breath
deep breath

we cant be over

deep breath
deep breath

hes walking away

deep breath
deep breath

how can he leave me

deep breath
deep breath

i cant believe i let him go

deep breath
deep breath

and now the tears come.

just trying out a new style of writing you tell me What u think!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dana

    It is definitely not something that i have seen before and i really like it!! you used it very well!

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I think this was an awesome style hun...it was different, i luffed this poem 5/5!
    *elizabeth*