Anger pours from the lines, raging from inside.
Tears replaced with the pen, she writes her problems away

i love that bit. this poem is yet another brilliant one from you hun. then again i dont think ive ever read one of yours that wasn't awesome! xox

Wow... amazing. you definately have some talent. your poem is just wow... i dont know what to say. its amazing.

Amazing poem keep up the good work 5/5

Great poem, great title. 5/5

love mark xxx

Wow. Fighter this is great, I love your work it's all so great! I love the part :Tears replaced with the pen, she writes her problems away
its prefect! Keep it up

Jenn x0x0x