It’s time like these

should be

It's time's like these

But we didn’t get to finish what we had start

should be

...started

It’s only till now it hit me
How much I really care

this does not make total sense...if you would want to change it,it should be something like...

" it took me this long
to realize I really care,
I need you so much,
and all the precious things we share."

nice insentive behind the poem though.

It’s time like these

should be

It's time's like these

But we didn’t get to finish what we had start

should be

...started

It’s only till now it hit me
How much I really care

this does not make total sense...if you would want to change it,it should be something like...

" it took me this long
to realize I really care,
I need you so much,
and all the precious things we share."

nice insentive behind the poem though.

It is a sweet yet sad poem i quite enjoyed reading that, well, just another 2 poems to go, but this one is a 4/5 great work!!!

Aww that was so cute!

The flow is rough but nice job....4/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Great poem! keep up da awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

Very well written! once again i really enjoyed it! well written and the emotion was there! definately a 5/5

Short and sweet... good wirte. Keep writing.

I thought this was a great write... it flowed nicely and had a good meaning to it. the first stanza is my favorite great job ..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*