Awesome work you two:D I think its great the way it is, And Ab thankyou for the comment, I doubt my abilities are good but knowing others think so it helps my flame grow stronger:)

Haha we are great...too bad you lost the first copy of this one =( it was great. xx love you xx

This poem is very nice
i like it
5/5

Cool work
this is good...
5/5
love
amy

Sorry...can't think of any....it's perfect the way it is...