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The poem is actually beautiful. So short, but so powerful. I can actually imagine how terrifying that situation must be. Great poem, 5/5.

BEAUTIFUL ^_^

Wow. thats really well written. did you expierience something like that? comment me back. great job - good writing

Thx for r/c on my poem

I can relate to this poem good write

I know how u feel for i am in the same sititution all the time with nothing but the blade in my hand wanting to just cut watching it fall and yea etc but just know that i am here and u wont ever be alone

Wow, This poem holds alot of emotion throughout it i really loved how sad and dark this is. Well done jaki! a good poem 5/5~mel

Wow it's s dark but it's really good.. i like it a lot!

Im speechless this poem was amazing