Super poem. its written so well. i love the title too, i'm not very good at titles, but this one is very effective and sums up the entire poem, i love the way that the final line is the title too.

great peice

5/5

Wow, I swear this could be an account of my own life right here. It was so heartfelt and so close to mine baby I think you are making me cry and I haven't done that in a LONG TIME! Wow, goodness me. This is really brillant and yeah I am crying now. Boys, they have no idea the damage they can do to a girl's heart.

-Tainted Mikochan

This is AMAZING....it feels like you were reading through my thoughts...the title was great...perfect

Excellent. Deffinitly 5/5. Very heartfelt and I've had my heart broken before and I know how much it hurts.

Brilliant. Keep writing so I can have more to read!

Chelseyy

Hey i loved this poem it so deep. i love how u made it that she was dead inside before the blade came. it was awesome GREAT WORK!!!!:)