Beautiful truly is lovely write you should get more comments for this it deserves alot of credit - its a fav keep it up its how I'm feeling right now please comment and vote on some of mine

Awww thats so sad....but i really liked it...
5/5 good job!!!

Beautiful Marianna, you truly have some beautiful talent...

hugs, love, Ann

Vote my poems please secret lover and i dont wanna and write comment

Wow this is a really good poem... keep writing....
SHAWNDA

Wow this is a really good poem... keep writing....
SHAWNDA

Wow nice poem...ilikeit...

Girl u got some words in dat mind of urs. U must be hurt or sumthin. But keep it up chick. Ya got skillz. God Bless!!!
Manda

Your poem was very nice and true. you wrote something that many can relate to.

That was really good! keep up the good work!

Check some of mine out sometime.

Thats so pretty and so true for me

Wow great poem 5/5

Really touchng and true in so many cases. Thanks for putting thoughts into words.

Wow Marianna all i can say is Wow! by just readin i felt exactly how u did. ya whoever you're writing about doesnt deserve u : ) maybe have a look at some of mine?? thanks. this is a really great poem ill read and rate more when i have time. 5/5

take care n keep ya head up hun xx

Hey your poem was really good. i could really relate to it and im sure others can to keep up the good work =]

I am impressed with this piece, very nice flow and natural rhyme.. the contradictory actions make for a good stanza..deep and insightful..great job

X-cellent write! been there done that one..keep up the good work!

I love this poem and you have definately convinced me to add you to my favorites! it describes how i'm feeling right now perfectly! keep up the good work! 5/5! :)
~Sarah
xoxo

Loved it.

Blood Shot Eyes.