I really liked it did you write it to a specifice person well girl? rate some of mine or comment plz

Hey that was a good poem. great job, keep it up! u can check out some of my poems if u want.

Wow thats an awesome poem in my mind its like a song lol that could be a really good song to wow great job

Wow that was really good i like it 5/5 keep it up hugs n kissses laura

I loved it!

HEY! I love this poem! You have a great story and it doesn't need rhythm as a crutch! Great job!

Awww sweet poem hun you obviously love her ... i say try win her back :) good luck always x x x

This was awesome poem. Loved it. talk to you soon.

Ashton. That was amazing! I could never, ever write poems like you. =)

Hi, I love the way you made this poem. The way you're typing it is beautiul and unique, which i fell in love with. Great job and 5/5 Chelsea