I like this poem morethan the otherone, the varied length of thelines and the rhythm of it showsmaybe ur confusion, cos i=u keep saying u dont wanthim anymore, but then sayign that ull have him back, like ull forget about him and what happened, and then that you still love him. Its a good poem, well dun lol

Kate - it kinda seems like i want him and then i dont beacuse thats how i feel , im so mad at the way that he treats me but im so in love that im willing to deal with it if he loves me back. lol its kinda confusing but i guess it makes sense to me :P

This poem is so real...about sumthing that truelu happens and i luv wen ppl write about sumthin real ttyl bye

Love tend to bring us both sadness and happiness. How we wish things will stay the way we wanted it to be. It's a nice one.

Wow i luuuuurve this poem i can relate, almost every poem ive written is similar to this. its hard when u love them but ur not really sure if they love u back. my guy is the same but i love him enough to deal with it to :P maybe have a read of some of my poems sometime and if u want to talk my MSN address is on my profile. Really great read i enjoyed it ..5..

Tc xx

Aww good poem!
really good!

DANG gurl i love da poem it was really really good